My Drabble (a hundred word or less story) was published today. Apropos, since I’m waiting for a flight to Paris. Coincidence?? You decide.
Someone from the Class of ’61 died today. No one close by, just someone I sent Christmas cards to and read posts by on Facebook about cats and grandchildren. And suddenly I longed to kiss someone.
No.
I wanted to make love that leaves bruises, jump in a lake at the top of the world so cold I gasp, ride the Roue de Paris, get drunk on Bastille Day and watch fireworks over the Seine and sing La Marseilles with strangers.
Instead I sent a sympathy card to her kids that said sorry for your loss.
This was no dribble, you’re Drabble, leaves me drooling for more of your poetic doodling! Excellent, as always!!
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Bob Lillie, you punny soul, you. Thanks so much!!
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Paris encore? Lucky you!
Hope you’ve found better lodgings than last time!
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Me too. An apartment on the right bank this time, half way between the Louvre and Notre Dame. Wish us luck!
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This is excellent. It tore right at my heart. The bigness and the smallness of life. It is a good thing that even more readers will get to experience your words on Drabble. Have a wonderful trip.
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Thanks, Ali. I won’t be there for Bastille Day this year, but I DO plan to celebrate life!
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I love how understated this poem is and the sad feel speaks to me right now…
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Thanks so much, Diana.
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I love this.
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Thanks, Jenn.
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That’s a nice one.
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Thank you!
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