Late afternoon in the valley, the trees
wear halos. Then twilight steals the sun,
kitchen lights blink on like stars,
and coming home is a sigh
and the smile of someone waiting.
Your day is told in half sentences
and nods and questions answered —
nothing new, but new enough to tell again.
After supper, after gin rummy and pages
turning and the rhythmic click of a sweater
growing row by row, bed greets you
like a childhood friend, and sleep
keeps company with the blue black sky
and the owl’s whispered flight.
– Sarah Russell
First published by Your Daily Poem
For Poets United Poetry Pantry
Painting source
With your words you weave a scene of domestic contentment. Lovely.
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Thank you. I spent a long time finding this kind of peace.
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this is so calming and relaxing, following the comforting rituals of a day
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Thanks, Beth. I think it’s those rituals that we don’t know are rituals that organize our world.
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I so agree
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I love the quiet image of home… the silent beauty, the company and telling of stories, the evening before just going to bed.
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Thanks, Bjorn. I love those evenings, too.
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A very sweet poem, it seems an ideal, someone coming home to their “dog.” Always glad to see them.
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Thanks, Annell.
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This is so lovely. I feel that way, too, about the comfort of home…..a refuge.
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Thanks, Sherry. Wish it could be this way for everyone.
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Beautiful! This is home as it should be, filled with warmth and welcoming and peace!
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I’m afraid many don’t have a home like that, but it’s what I finally found after many years.
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Loved so much.
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Thanks a lot, Vicki.
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A lot happens in a day — the world rises and falls everywhere and for all — yet homecomings are ever the most personal, private and intimate of motions, crossing an immense threshold between Out There and Home. This is woven so dearly of that inward fabric, loved it as much as I love coming home from work. Best is when there are two parties who agree.
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Yes, indeed that’s true, Brendan. And as you say, it’s a threshold of public and private lives.
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Very good
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Thanks for stopping by, Julian.
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This is so beautifully drawn … I am there. My favorite line: ‘bed greets you
like a childhood friend’. Lovely writing, Sarah.
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Thanks a lot, Wendy.
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Beautiful, Sarah!
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Thanks so much!
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“and sleep keeps company with the blue black sky
and the owl’s whispered flight”.. this is so beautiful! ❤❤
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Thanks, Sanaa. Those lines just happened. I love it when the poem helps me write it!
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I feel content and right at home. Lovely.
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Thanks, Gallivanta!
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I do so love your lovely warm and comforting words Sarah – they make me feel snug and safe.
“…and the rhythmic click of a sweater
growing row by row” – lovely lovely lovely!
Anna :o]
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Thanks, Anna. That comes directly from my own evenings at home. I’m always knitting something.
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Oh, that is just gorgeous! A celebration of the ‘ordinary’ things which are so often the best of life.
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Thank you, Rosemary. I think we forget to honor the “everyday” unless it isn’t there anymore.
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I just “followed.” Thanks for dropping by.
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Thanks 😍I’ll be back
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The scene you write of takes me back to my time of youth with my grandmother. Time without electronics to s easily steal our skill and tallent
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Thanks, Dodie. I wonder sometimes what this surge of technology will yield for our grandkids’ generation — besides early arthritis in the neck…
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What a lovely poem; the words create a picture so clearly – really like it. Thank you.
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Thanks so much, Liz.
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