The 3rd of my poems published by Verse-Virtual. There are so many beautiful poems in this issue. I’m honored to be among them.
Seaweed calligraphy at the tide’s edge.
A crab tracks through, smears the ink.
I wait for the fog to lift. The gulls argue
over someone’s sandwich crust, get on
with survival. I remember your words,
the undertow.
Nice Sarah
Sent from my iPhone
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Thanks, Steve!
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❤
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Thank you for the love, Beth.
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This is so beautiful and makes me so homesick for the Southern Atlantic Coast, where I grew up. I’m especially fond of the laughing gulls and the salty air that made my first visits to the Pacific Coast a bit disappointing.
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Thanks, Alarie! I know the Atlantic coast better too. Guess that flavored the poem. Great insight.
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Beautiful, Sarah! Well done!!
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Thanks, Ryan.
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This is so beautiful – your eye for the small lives so many dont realise are there. And then the undertow of remembered words. Really lovely.
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Thank you, Sherry.
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“the undertow”… such a punch to the poem.. beautiful writing, as always, Sarah.
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Thanks, Rajani!
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Love the beautiful images all along with the succinct end.
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Thanks for visiting, Sumana.
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~~~~ simply gorgeous.
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Thanks so much, Helen!
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I love this poem, Sarah, with its seaweed calligraphy and crabs smearing ink. The gulls arguing is wonderful touch!
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Thanks, Kim.
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You’re welcome!
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Stunning write, Sarah! 💙💙💙
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Thank you, Sana!
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oh sarah that sure pulls me under
you left just the right amount of space in it
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Thanks, Eric. I love your comment. …space… Yup. That’s what we try to do, isn’t it.
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Been a while, Sarah, so happy to see you still at the tideline, washing, burnishing, reflecting.
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Yes, I’m still here, Brendan. Thanks for visiting!
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